Showing posts with label editing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label editing. Show all posts

Monday, October 11, 2010

Hit job

OK, after about a month off, I'm back, happily employed in the news biz and working with a great bunch of people, a mix of old newspaper hands, web pros and others.

Time to get back to editing talk.

First up this morning is this headline:

Obama Is in the Jaws of Political Death: Can He Survive?

Let me see. His poll numbers are down but not as low as Ronald Reagan's at this point. The House may indeed turn over to Republican control. Maybe even the Senate. Political death?

Then there's the story. Seriously, what reporter regularly refers to "elites" as if he were in a political science class?  Then this:

The misery afflicting the country has no political affiliation. Listen to the voices from this striking TV ad for Rob Portman, the Republican former Congressman and Bush budget director who is running for Senate from Ohio. One woman at a Dayton career fair says starkly, "There are no jobs." A man announces plaintively and with obvious frustration, "I've been looking for a job now for 13 months." Events like this job fair are becoming the grim iconic gatherings of our time, the breadlines for the Obama years.  


This "has no political affiliation" but then consists of quotes from a Republican commercial??

There may well be a good story to be done that assesses the competence of the Obama administration. This isn't it.
No editor should have let this story see the light of day.

Monday, March 1, 2010

Editing at the Speed of...Oh, No Editing.

It should come as a surprise to  no one to learn that magazines often do less or even no copy editing on their web material.  (And this isn't limited to magazines.) I don't know why companies do this.

The consistency of this practice would seem to indicate that publications are more interested in preserving a well-edited print record instead of ensuring the web version is clean. It wouldn't seem to be just money, otherwise publications could shift people from print to web.

So it would seem to be something about how they view the value of the web, and a prevailing sense that web copy can quickly be fixed, with no one the wiser. And that it is often writers, not editors, who have established sites.

Thursday, December 31, 2009

Journalism Ground Rules

In keeping with Jay Rosen's suggestion that TV shows fact check Sunday morning talk-show guests  (and why should this be a novel idea? And yet it is.),  I'd like to see TV news programs return to journalism by:

a. Acknowledge people's financial/lobbyist connections when they're on TV talking in their "expert" capacity (ex-military officers, Michael Chertoff, et al.)


and
 
b. State the ground rules of the interview. If someone comes onto a show with a promise that certain topics are off limits, then the show should say so ahead of time. And if they refuse to answer, DON'T BRING THEM BACK ON.
 
 

Thursday, September 10, 2009

Really, Let's Think a Little More

Napalm girl's new mission
In the 1970s, her photo was credited with helping to end the Vietnam War. » What Kim Phuc is doing now?

Oh, my. So sensitivity is just not a factor anymore? Napalm Girl?

Monday, August 24, 2009

Wikipedia Comes to Its Senses

Very glad to see this:

Wikipedia to Add Editorial Review of Some Changes - NYTimes.com


By NOAM COHEN
Published: August 24, 2009

Wikipedia, one of the 10 most popular sites on the Web, was founded about eight years ago as a long-shot experiment to create a free encyclopedia from the contributions of volunteers, all with the power to edit, and presumably improve, the content.

Now, as the English-language version of Wikipedia has just surpassed three million articles, that freewheeling ethos is about to be curbed.

Officials at the Wikimedia Foundation, the nonprofit in San Francisco that governs Wikipedia, say that within weeks, the English-language Wikipedia will begin imposing a layer of editorial review on articles about living people.


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Sunday, August 2, 2009

When a Band-Aid Won't Do

At the risk of sounding as if I'm piling on, I'm wondering how many newspapers, other than The New York Times, could afford to indulge in the Newspaper Copy Editors Full Employment Act, AKA, Alessandra Stanley?

Better yet, how many of you either in the business or forced out in recent months by stupid corporate decisions, would be willing to take on the job of Personal Copy Editor to a mistake-ridden reporter?

I'm holding back on commenting on whether the copy editor who started working on this error-loaded piece on Walter Cronkite and then had to set it aside handled it properly. I don't know the Times' system, and each paper has its own rules and culture about how to deal with story hand-offs. Obviously some are better than others.

But one thing about these trying times: if you've got someone who is adding to the work of a depleted staff, please, think some more about what to do. When people are bleeding all over the battlefield, and your company is down to platoon strength, you can't afford to stop to put a Band-Aid on one of them. It really isn't a good use of your resources.

It's triage time.

Saturday, July 5, 2008

Taking Action, Speaking Up

This may help or not but at least it's an effort.

I got interrupted for a moment. What I was about to say was that I wish more working copy editors would blog about their experiences, make the argument for their worth and, not incidentally, get involved in what is happening to news publications and their jobs and their craft. Passivity is killing us. I'm not saying we can save traditional copy desks or even if we should. But there are too many voices, some smarter than others, often belonging to writers or tech-heads, kissing off our careers or denouncing us.

And I'm not referring to professors, who tend to take a longer view than we might because they're teaching the next generation or because that's just who they are.

Part of what is disturbing copy editors is the suddenness with which job loss has arrived at their doorstep. I know you can argue that the news business has failed because it ignored the Internet for too long or stuck to the wrong business model. But as recently as a few months ago, newspapers were still hiring copy editors even as they shed other jobs.

The loss of jobs has as much to do with corporate takeovers, top-level decisionmaking and a rotten economy as it does with whether our craft has any value.

I get a Google alert on several words, including on variations of copy editor and there's a rather surprising number of tech-focused people who think we have no value, that editing can just as easily be done after the posting or see as as a layer of cost or , worst, have an axe to grind with editors and use their blogs to make their point. It is long past the point where copy editors speak up, where members of ACES confront some of these issues and maybe, just maybe, save the craft, if not the job. I'd say we owe that to readers, first, and to our fellow editors, if not to our industry.

I continue to be surprised at how the same four or five people get quoted on the topic of editing, particularly those who have no interest in--and in fact, clearly would benefit from--editing, and those who confuse blogging with the reporting, editing and posting of news stories.

There's a difference between, say, a political blog that is happening in relatively real time where something is reported, the site goes and gets response, does some digging and comes up with more material and updates its information as it goes along, and a newspaper web site that reports on a car accident or a town board meeting. The political site is reporting on or even participating in the to-and-fro, something interesting in its own right. The news site telling us about whether our school budget is going to raise my taxes is an entirely different matter--I don't want to have to go back and read it six times to find out if the facts were wrong, been updated or has more quotes.

Bloggers tend to hear from other bloggers and so convince themselves that there are millions of people out there who have nothing else to do but monitor web sites all day long. If you're involved in your community in any way, you know there are scads of people who read the web only erratically and don't want to go back and read, let's say, the car crash story five times while the newspaper attempts to edit the story and get the facts right.

Monday, November 19, 2007

Reading Fades

I'm a little late to the party on this one today, but this is certainly dreary, on a day already filled with glum news.

Fewer people are reading, we learn. Meantime, newspapers are racing each other to the web where too often videos substitute for reading. I've used videos myself, as you can see, but can defend the occasionally video where appropriate (Erin McKean is a joy in print but to see her in action at a conference is all the better under the right circumstances). It's not that the web eliminates reading. It most certainly does not. But the huge amount of material available on the Web, along with the entertainmente factor of just watching things happen instead of actually reading,, as computers turn into TV outlets, provide games, music and more, cannot be good for us who depend on the word, not only for a living but for our own enjoyment.

We're busy giving away the franchise. At the very least, we certainly aren't helping ourselves.

Maybe the corporate people are right: Digital media won't be a sideshow in the future

and what San Jose may do is what we'll all be doing:

"The very top of the organization is saying, blow up the newsroom," says Chris O'Brien, a reporter immersed in the overhaul effort. Under one prototype, the paper would be cut back to three sections: Live, Play and Innovate. In a second blueprint, it would junk everything except Silicon Valley business news.


But, back to the reading problem:

A Troubling Case of Readers' Block
Citing Decline Among Older Kids, NEA Report Warns of Dire Effects
By Bob Thompson
Washington Post Staff Writer
Monday, November 19, 2007; Page C01
Americans are reading less and their reading proficiency is declining at troubling rates, according to a report that the National Endowment for the Arts will issue today (Monday). The trend is particularly strong among older teens and young adults, and if it is not reversed, the NEA report suggests, it will have a profound negative effect on the nation's economic and civic future.

"This is really alarming data," said NEA Chairman Dana Gioia. "Luckily, we still have an opportunity to address it, but if we wait 10, 20 years, I think it may be too late."

Titled "To Read or Not to Read," the report is a significant expansion of the NEA's widely cited 2004 study, "Reading at Risk." The NEA based that earlier study exclusively on data from its own arts surveys, and as a result, that analysis focused mainly on so-called literary reading -- novels, stories, plays and poems. This led some critics to downplay its implications.

The new report assembles much more data, drawing on large-scale studies done by other government agencies (such as the Department of Education) and by non-government organizations. These studies tend to use broader definitions of reading, said Sunil Iyengar, the NEA's director of research and analysis, with many looking at "all kinds of reading," a category that includes reading done online.

The story the numbers tell, Gioia said, can be summed up in about four sentences:

"We are doing a better job of teaching kids to read in elementary school. But once they enter adolescence, they fall victim to a general culture which does not encourage or reinforce reading. Because these people then read less, they read less well. Because they read less well, they do more poorly in school, in the job market and in civic life."

Particularly striking, Gioia and Iyengar both said, are the declines that occur between age 9 and age 17 in reading proficiency scores and time spent reading.


Oh, heck, I give up tonight. The Google-AP deal explained, for those who don't/can't read.


Thursday, September 27, 2007

We've Got a Secret. Or Not.

Uh. WHAT??


Spies Prep Reporters on Protecting Secrets
By JOSH GERSTEIN
Staff Reporter of the Sun
September 27, 2007

Frustrated by press leaks about its most sensitive electronic surveillance work, the secretive National Security Agency convened an unprecedented series of off-the-record "seminars" in recent years to teach reporters about the damage caused by such leaks and to discourage reporting that could interfere with the agency's mission to spy on America's enemies.

The half-day classes featured high-ranking NSA officials highlighting objectionable passages in published stories and offering "an innocuous rewrite" that officials said maintained the "overall thrust" of the articles but omitted details that could disclose the agency's techniques, according to course outlines obtained by The New York Sun.

Dubbed "SIGINT 101," using the NSA's shorthand for signals intelligence, the seminar was presented "a handful of times" between approximately 2002 and 2004, an agency spokeswoman, Marci Green, confirmed yesterday. Officials were pleased with the program, she said.

"They believe they were very successful in being able to talk to journalists regarding our mission and the sensitivities of our mission in an unclassified way," Ms. Green said.

The syllabi make clear that the sessions, which took place at NSA headquarters in Fort Meade, Md., were conceived of not merely as familiarization tours, but as part of a campaign to limit the damage caused by leaks of sensitive intelligence.

Thursday, September 20, 2007

Wikipedia Tries Vetting

This was overdue. Democratic projects are fine, but facts aren't democratic. Wikipedia is a grand concept in need of some serious rethinking. It can, for example, add dozens of editors willing to work for nothing but interested in supporting the idea. But the present course is ridiculous. Celebrity A dies; detractors rush in to impugn him; fans turn up to defend and exaggerate his successes.

This will start in Germany but I hope it spreads soon. Wikipedia Faces the Facts
It might be visited by 7 per cent of internet users every day, and have helped to win many a pub quiz, but Wikipedia is still hampered by its inability to guarantee that information appearing on the website is true.

To rectify this the online encyclopaedia is to tackle its reliability problem with a package designed to improve its trustworthiness and reliability.

The German-language version is to pioneer the first and potentially most controversial change, by which ordinary readers will lose their ability to alter any entry and see their changes appear instantly on the screen, New Scientist reports today.

Instead, instant editing will be restricted to a group of “trusted editors”, who must first earn their status by proving their commitment to the Wikipedia concept. One proposal is to limit trusted status to those who have made 30 reliable edits in 30 days. Ordinary users will still be able to propose changes, but these will have to be vetted by a trusted editor before they appear. The English-language version will retain instant editing for now.

Thursday, August 16, 2007

Wikipedia Editing Tracked UPDATED

Wikipedia 'shows CIA page edits'
The tool detected changes to a page about Mahmoud Ahmadinejad
By Jonathan Fildes
BBC News
An online tool that claims to reveal the identity of organisations that edit Wikipedia pages has revealed that the CIA was involved in editing entries.

Wikipedia Scanner allegedly shows that workers on the agency's computers made edits to the page of Iran's president.

It also purportedly shows that the Vatican has edited entries about Sinn Fein leader Gerry Adams.

The tool, developed by US researchers, trawls a list of 5.3m edits and matches them to the net address of the editor.

Wikipedia is a free online encyclopaedia that can be created and edited by anyone.
... The site also indicates that a computer owned by the US Democratic Party was used to make changes to the site of right-wing talk show host Rush Limbaugh.


UPDATE at 11:45 a.m.: Fox News got into the act, too.
Here's one little bit:
...You'll find changes that were made by IP address 12.167.224.228, which resolves to Fox News. Changes are to the articles “Keith Olbermann”, “Chris Wallace”, “Carl Cameron”, “Brit Hume”, “Shepard Smith”, “Al Franken”, “Brian Wilson”, “CNN”, and “Greta Van Susteren”.

And from chatmag.com:

In the latest news regarding the growing controversy over the Dateline NBC series, "To Catch a Predator", the vigilante group NBC employs to facilitate the stings has suffered yet another setback.

Founder of Perverted-Justice.com Phillip Eide, aka XavierVE on Wikipedia, has been indefinitely blocked from posting edits within Wikipedia.

Since the first posting of the Wikipedia article regarding Perverted-Justice.com, Eide has repeatedly posted what can only be described as "flaming" posts; deleted other posts critical to Perverted-Justice.com, and when taken to task, replied with more invectives.

And

Cast Your Vote On The Wikipedia Editing Wall Of Shame
By Scott Gilbertson
Threat Level is running a poll where you can track and vote on the most shameful and/or disturbing Wikipedia edits found with Virgil Griffith’s new Wikipedia search tool. For those that missed the story, Griffith created a tool that unmasks the anonymous edits made to Wikipedia pages.

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